I feel like the comments that are on the side are more centered and specific. She utilizes a more specific aim as to what she thinks the student should work on. For example, the fact that she highlights the word alone shows her concern to specifically that. Also, she asks questions that go along the line of elaborating and being able to breakdown a specific item. Whereas, when she gives the total comment, she gives an overview comment to the whole entire analysis in under five sentences. There's not many suggestions going there that say, "try changing this with that." Rather, I feel it's her total point of view on the total idea of the paper. Also, in the side comments, she freely compliments and agrees which shows interest. From student to student, I can understand that feeling because having a professor engage in a paper for more than just criticism is a great feeling.
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